Soon to be apprentice

[dawnkit]

Name: Barkkit (Barkpelt)
Age: 6 moons
Gender: Tom
Desired Position: Apprentice
Clan: ThunderClan
History:

This little cat was a loner's kit until the loners were killed by two-legs he wandered on to Thunderclan territory starving and was found by a patrol. They allowed the kit to Join when he was Four moons old and he grew up in the nursery happily. He had a few fights with the other kits about not being Clan born and Not being a true warrior because of it but he always won. He is now ready to be apprenticed

Apperance:

His fur is dappled Dark brown tabby. His fur looks EXACTLY like Bark on an Oak tree. His eyes have a foggy look to them and Are a blueish gray with dark Gray pupils. he has perfect sight despite the strange appearance of his eyes. His paws are the only part of his Fur not Brown he has Beautiful White paws With Midnight black claws.

Personality:

He is Quiet and reserved around Most adult cats. Around kits and apprentices he is playful and Rambunctious he absolutely LOVes caring for and listening to Elders. He wants more than anything to kill all the Two-legs on earth but also thanks him for causing him to be in Thunderclan. He is so loyal he would Jump off a cliff into a mass of Dogs to save his clan. He is uncertain when it Come to She-cats he doesn't particularly like them and thinks they are a bit Weird. He is usually pretty funny when around his peers. and can be REALLy stupid

[-((Pale))-]

Could you make the history and personality a little longer?

[+ Javu +]

and appearance...

[dawnkit]

SURWE! i try....

[[D]eaddy]

Much better welcome to ThunderClan

[dawnkit]

yay